ArtistGamerGal's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crystal Gem Mugshots]

Love it! You really captured their personalities with these poses! Great job!

Although when doing a GIF you should always make sure there is something on the first frame (even for just 1 frame) so that there is something to show in the preview.

Cogmoses responds:

Thank you! I appreciate the comment!

And yeah, I'll have to keep that in mind the next time I submit a gif here.

[My Bass Guitar BNW]

Needs refining

I would say this is just a sketch. I would encourage you to go back and refine it. You should probabley ink it as well as color it to make it seem more finished. Some of the line work seems shakey and unsteady. If you decide to ink it then you should try and make the lines more smooth and confident looking. If you don't have a lot of experiance coloring then I would start with colored pencils, they allow more room for mistakes. Good luck and keep practicing! :)

AussieHoon responds:

Thanks for the Feedback :)

[antareja]

The boob...

Seems flat. Some anatomy issues overall in the positioning of the arms and legs. Should probabley use more real life or photo reference next time.

Other then that- Awesome. Like the watercolor painting style A LOT.

mugyamugya responds:

thanks. i am practicing in drawing humanoids. seems difficult without reference though

[the bots]

Love it!

Great work. I love the controled color palette with the dashes of bright blue, yellow, and green. The characters are unique yet uniformed under one universal style. Great work here. I really love this and your art style overall!

lenkalamari responds:

thankyou!

[Slushy land]

Nice

Love the background, great use of color in this as well.

My main problem with this piece is the anatomy. The breasts are too high on the rib cage. Even with a push up bra breasts aren't that high on the rib cage. The mid section also leaves something to be desired with the off centered belly button. The lips on the face also appear to be too low. Either lengthen the nose or bring up the lips and shorten the whole face.

You have a great understanding of light and color so I don't understand why you are outlining it all in black- it distracts from all the great color and painting work you did. You have great potential, keep at it! I hope this helps :)

toshema responds:

Thank you for the crit, it helps allot !!!!!!! ^_^ !!!!!!

[Alice of Wonderland]

MS paint? damn!

That must have been quite a challenge in paint! I'm impressed!

My biggest problem with this piece is that there is no weight in the pose. Typically if either leg was in the current pose the oppisite leg would need to be firmly planted on the ground to hold the body weight. It might be more clear if there was a suggestion of a ground plane instead of just a solid black background.

Rooshie responds:

Ya i did that at first, but shes pissed and shes holding a gun, she wont be walking like shes taking a stroll, she'd be walking like shes motherfucking Rambo, shes gonna menstruate all over her foes ass, that's how pissed she is. And about the firmly planting the leg, don't worry, never be firm on the ground, be as loose as possible ( teehee) life would have no meaning if you were firm to the ground. And art generally depicts your mood in life, i was feeling meretricious at the time, sort of in the porn mood, but didn't want to go through finding a good porno and waiting for it to buffer, et cetera, et cetera. Thanks for the feedback and criticism, I did take it lightly. :D Jks, nah i took it like it was pregnancy.

[Mihai]

uh huh...

once again cool drawing, great graphic style here, but your male characters are extremely feminine. Practice drawing masculine features more. Don't make the eyelases stand out so much and define the jawline more if you want a long haired guy to look masculine.

Citrina responds:

I swear on my Wacom tablet that my husband really has eyelashes that long.
Besides, I don't want him to look masculine. I want him to look like himself :)

[On a leash]

hmm...

it's a good drawing. the details are well done.
but that is a really girly looking boy.
maybe that's part of the charcter, I dont know.

Citrina responds:

Yep, it's a yaoi boy, sorta you-can-only-tell-it's-a-boy-when-he's-naked type :) My personal favorite, lol

[Maid]

Good but...

It's cute but the arms seem too skinny and strangely posed. Other then that I like the face and the clothing design is cute.

bloominglove responds:

Actually, if her head was a bit smaller I think it'll be fine... But, hey, it's anime... :3