ArtistGamerGal's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Slushy land]

Nice

Love the background, great use of color in this as well.

My main problem with this piece is the anatomy. The breasts are too high on the rib cage. Even with a push up bra breasts aren't that high on the rib cage. The mid section also leaves something to be desired with the off centered belly button. The lips on the face also appear to be too low. Either lengthen the nose or bring up the lips and shorten the whole face.

You have a great understanding of light and color so I don't understand why you are outlining it all in black- it distracts from all the great color and painting work you did. You have great potential, keep at it! I hope this helps :)

toshema responds:

Thank you for the crit, it helps allot !!!!!!! ^_^ !!!!!!

[Alice of Wonderland]

MS paint? damn!

That must have been quite a challenge in paint! I'm impressed!

My biggest problem with this piece is that there is no weight in the pose. Typically if either leg was in the current pose the oppisite leg would need to be firmly planted on the ground to hold the body weight. It might be more clear if there was a suggestion of a ground plane instead of just a solid black background.

Rooshie responds:

Ya i did that at first, but shes pissed and shes holding a gun, she wont be walking like shes taking a stroll, she'd be walking like shes motherfucking Rambo, shes gonna menstruate all over her foes ass, that's how pissed she is. And about the firmly planting the leg, don't worry, never be firm on the ground, be as loose as possible ( teehee) life would have no meaning if you were firm to the ground. And art generally depicts your mood in life, i was feeling meretricious at the time, sort of in the porn mood, but didn't want to go through finding a good porno and waiting for it to buffer, et cetera, et cetera. Thanks for the feedback and criticism, I did take it lightly. :D Jks, nah i took it like it was pregnancy.

[Redead Love]

LOL!

Great joke, great punch line, good drawings :)
Thanks for sharing this!

[--White Rabbit--]

cool

its like naruto meets furry!
jk, its good. :)

[[High Def Sprite] Dan]

WOW

Thats awesome! I really like it when flash art uses colored outlines that are a darker shade of the color inside. It always makes it feel like less of a line drawing. Great work!

[Mihai]

uh huh...

once again cool drawing, great graphic style here, but your male characters are extremely feminine. Practice drawing masculine features more. Don't make the eyelases stand out so much and define the jawline more if you want a long haired guy to look masculine.

Citrina responds:

I swear on my Wacom tablet that my husband really has eyelashes that long.
Besides, I don't want him to look masculine. I want him to look like himself :)

[On a leash]

hmm...

it's a good drawing. the details are well done.
but that is a really girly looking boy.
maybe that's part of the charcter, I dont know.

Citrina responds:

Yep, it's a yaoi boy, sorta you-can-only-tell-it's-a-boy-when-he's-naked type :) My personal favorite, lol

[Zilla v2.0]

Cool

Push the contrast a little more, you know, like heavier shadows and starker brights and this thing will really pop. Cool drawing!

[Jasmine (Layla) *Revamp*]

Cool

Love the colors and the style. The burst of light behind the waist really adds that somewhat magical feeling. But the length of the arms, at least in contrast to the legs, is too long. I'd say shorten them and you're golden.

[Cycled selfcreation]

Love it!

Great work here, love the colors!