ArtistGamerGal's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SailorMan]

Nailed it.

That's JUST what being a fourteen year old girl is like! ...if you have super powers and walk around half naked.

[Night of the Redead]

Good for a second flash!

Nice original story based in the Zelda world. I was expecting Link to appear at some point but it was still interesting none the less!

I didn't know this was only your second attempt at making an animation! Great work for your second attempt (my second attempt was much worse lol) My favorite thing about this was the use of color- very vibrant and you chose lots of great purples and stark contrasts that really remind me of the majora's mask art style. I also loved the cinematic camera angles- you really have an eye for setting the mood in that way.

The thing that bothered me the most was the character animation. If seems like nearly all of this was tweened. In some places that works just fine but in others it looks very awkward. I used to only tween when I first started using flash but after reading some books on traditional 2D animation I realized that frame by frame animation is MUCH more effective and much less restrictive. Try learning some frame by frame techniques and implimenting that into the tweening techniques that work well in your animations.

Thanks for sharing this! :D

Eastbeast responds:

Yeah I wanted to have the charcters try to hold their own without Link because I really admire them :) So far I am incredibley grateful for the constructive comments I've recieved about this, especially from and artist that inspires me such as you. Yeah this wouldn't have made it without the darkness of major that I love so much. The most that I could ask is that people want to revisit the game after this.

You know you are absolutely right! Frame by frame is my logical next step, so maybe you could pm me some pointers on where to begin with that. haha I sure love to throw that camera around. ffex is showing me how to make it less squishy, thank you for your review :)

[How are ya doin.]

I wouldn't want to run into that cat in an alley

Great animation and funny voices! Loved how you stretch the flesh when you animate the mouth. There are some really funny drawings in there! I missed you guys!

[Light and Wily..]

Haha!

Great job guys!
Really funny drawings! I wasn't expecting the ending either haha!
Great work, good to see you guys again :D

[School 13 - TongueTied]

lol

That girl is a hoe...

Sorry, most girls wouldn't do that.

But beyond the far fetched story it was really good. Great backgrounds and the characters were really appealing. Good work as always :)

[dogtime]

Great work!

You're a very talented animator!
All this needs is some polishing. A few more inbetweens would help in some of the "jumpy" areas, but your timing and use of squash and stretch is very appealing!

I'm also not a fan of the soundtrack. I actually found it somewhat distracting.
But overall, great work! Polish this and it could be a portfolio piece!

[Jackie]

Love it <3

Jackie is my personal hero.
This is what life is really like- if you don't like it then take the route Jerry took haha

[: 4y-Records Episode 5 :]

Thank god!

I've been saying this for years to my friends who are obsessed with those games! If they spent the same amount of time playing a real guitar that might actually have learned something. And it's true- music is dead thanks to compression.

Great rants as always

[Sing, Kitty, Swing!]

Great work!

Very good work here! Loved the design of the kitty, it was soo cute!
Just some things that need work would be when the cat is running you need to speed it up more as well as have the paws stretch out in front of the cat further to make it feel more like a run. That was the only thing that really bothered me.

[All Work 2008 & Before.]

Wow!

loved it! awesome stuff. *favorited*

Jae responds:

Thanks a lort!!