Good but..
I'm gunna come right out and admit that I don't get the joke, I assume it was funny because a lot of people liked it, but I have no idea who these people are, my loss most likely. But anyway this was basically a "one liner" joke animation, don't think it really deserves a 4 just because it's so short and coming up with one joke certainly doesn't deserve daily 3rd. Although it was a small amount of animation, I still liked it. And peeing on dead corpses is pretty funny. 7/10
cool but...
His legs don't really look like they're attached to his body. They seem to float around his circular lower body.
When anything walks the whole body goes through a process of ups and downs, not just the legs. Maybe you were trying to give him a strange walk since he's a fictional creature of some sort but it still needs the ups and downs.
"The Animator's Survival Guide" by Richard Williams is an awesome book for animation and includes walk cycles. Check it out if you can. Hope that helps.
His body has ups and downs but not excessively. The legs were tricky. :) Thanks for the hint.
Now i want a sandwhich!
Great job! Loved it! Funny and good animation.
(This is super nit-picky but if it helps- the throw at the milk bottles movement needs a follow through. you know, like his arm trailing down after he throws. it will help it feel more like a throw.)
You're very talented! Keep it up!
Hmm i thought it did that.. maybe i need to make it more clear! - Glad you liked it though :D
Short...
A bit short, but the joke was cute.
Animation felt really stiff.
It was for the Street Fighter collab. It had to be no more than 30 seconds (at least, that's what the rules said originally. Not many seemed to follow that rule though).
Hmm..
Okay I'm gunna be completely honest here, you really went crazy with that blur effect. At first it was fine but after seeing it what felt like 20 times I was no longer impressed. What seemed like the opening sequence seemed much longer then the actual "meat" of the episode.
I see there was a lot of effort put into this but you should not rely so much on effects. Good old fashioned animation is what is going to make your submissions better.
Yeah. Thanks a bunch.
good old fashion animation is what was the 'meat' of the animation. and the intro was exactly that. an intro. it was long because the song was long, while establishing something for those who've followed the story. I didn't set out to impress you with blur filters.
HAHAHA!
"Stop looking at my nipples."
"But I... uhhh..."
ROFL!!!
hilarious!
really funny, great idea!
my only advice is that it felt a bit long. the mispelled words, accent, and simple animation was hilarious but after about 2 minutes i was loosing interest. maybe vary it up and add more comical situations next time or shorten it to keep it golden.
omg hahaha
awesome! loved it. hilarious! Keep it up!
haha
very nice! well done! the "racist" or "terrorist" part was hilarious.
funny, but true!
Lol.
good, but...
to be honest i was expecting more.
i liked the animation though!
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